Harry, I like the style of DPS, I like the colour scheme and think it works well. However I think that there's too much white space around the picture and this should be filled with something.
I think that you need to put a bit more colour in your contents page, as currently it's a bit bland.
The front cover's looking good, however you need to correct a few spelling errors 'The Maccabees' I also feel that the magazine looks a bit too much like 4-4-2 magazine Harry. I like the colour scheme, however I feel that you could do with changing the colour over the jeans as you can't read it properly. Other than that it's looking good.
Harry,
ReplyDeleteI like the style of DPS, I like the colour scheme and think it works well. However I think that there's too much white space around the picture and this should be filled with something.
I think that you need to put a bit more colour in your contents page, as currently it's a bit bland.
The front cover's looking good, however you need to correct a few spelling errors 'The Maccabees' I also feel that the magazine looks a bit too much like 4-4-2 magazine Harry. I like the colour scheme, however I feel that you could do with changing the colour over the jeans as you can't read it properly. Other than that it's looking good.