Cover Re-draft

I have changed the masthead and main coverline slightly, by removing the stroke on them. I have also shortened the subtitle on the main coverline and removed some coverlines. I have added a banner at the top and a lure in the circular text box. 

Magazine improvements from feedback

From the feedback I have received from teachers and peers, i think the following improvements may be necessary: 
Cover: 
-Reduce the amount of text on the right of the page.
-Change colour and amount of text under 'SAM BURNHAM' coverline. 
-Change colour/brightness or contrast of main image. 
-Consider changing background from plain white. 
Contents 
-Change picture of lad in football shirt 
Double Page Spread
-Check spelling errors
-Make sure article suits genre etc.