Evaluation Activity 1

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products? (i.e. of music magazines)

The title of my magazine ‘Radar’ is quite suitable to the indie genre. The example of New Musical Express (NME) is similar sort of title in a way. Radar represents looking for something new, and so this indicates that the magazine is interested in new music. I feel that indie is an example of a genre that is always changing and new artists help change people’s perception of ‘indie’ and my magazine could be used as a way of promoting new artists as many magazines of this type are. 

My front page is set out in a fairly simple manner, the main image takes up about a third of the page as it is a full body shot as apposed to a mid shot or close up which would take up a lot more of the page. This resulted in a lot of blank white space, so I did have to put more cover lines in than i originally planned to. My drafts are good examples of how the magazine doesn’t look quite right with less cover lines, I feel the final cover has enough content to fill the page but not so much that it looks overcrowded. My contents page is set out in a more complicated and condensed manner, although I fell that it is still easy to understand and read. I have made a simple list of the features included and images of the main stories in the magazine. The double page spread is set out in quite a formal style, this arguably goes against the normal conventions of the genre where the layout can be fairly messy and a bit unconnected in places like this example from NME.

A convention I have used is having the main image on one page and article on the opposite. The example also uses some smaller images in the article which is a convention that I haven’t followed as I feel the page may have become overcrowded. This challenges the crowded nature of this genres and goes along with my idea of a simplistic style to my magazine. The model used has a fairly serious but neutral facial expression, this is due to the timid nature I imagine the artist to have. His outfit of buttoned-up shirt and skinny black jeans is suited to the indie genre. My photos contain a wide range of different shots, but I felt the full bod shot was the way to go. It does allow more space for cover lines and in a way makes the image of the artist a bit more iconic and allows the audience to see the artist in full. The images used in the contents are more ‘in action’ shots and include a caption involving what the feature is about. 

The font for my masthead is ‘Headline One’ which I have also used for the page numbers on the contents page. The main font I have used is ‘Myriad Pro’ which is a simple but professional looking font. The style I wanted to get with theses fonts was again simplistic and these fonts do work well. The colour schemes in the cover, contents and double page spread all follow a fairly basic three-colour scheme. The front cover is black/red/white - these colours work quite well together and the red used makes the masthead and coverlines stick out a bit more. The contents page is a mixture of grey, black and white which makes it seem a bit more simplistic. The double page spread has a similar scheme to the cover with black, white and the one contrasting colour - green. Indie magazines can have a very untidy colour scheme and make the covers themselves look again overcrowded. This is an example of this:

The aim I personally had was to make the magazine look as ‘real’ as possible. I tried to use many features to make it seem as professional as possible. The artist on the front therefore had to be represented in a way so he looked like a professional artist and suit the genre. His blank expression indicates a from of arrogance but is also quite neutral but the hint of arrogance is almost typical of some indie artists. Magazines of the Indie genre are usually quite cluttered and potentially overcrowded in most cases, so I feel my magazine challenges these traditions in this way. 

Evaluation Activity 2

How does your media product represent particular social groups?

The image of Orlando Weeks shows him in a similar outfit to my artist, he is in action in this shot but he has quite a calm facial expression. They are both wearing a similar short sleeve shirt with it buttoned all the way up which is more common in the Indie artists. Orlando Weeks has a very timid approach in his performance, I aim my artist’s character to be a slightly more outlandish as described in my article. In the full length shots you also see my model wearing skinny black jeans which is a common feature in indie frontmen. The shoes worn by my model are a bit more formal that the stereotypical indie artists footwear, although the model is not dressed to be on stage and is more of a formal occasion so we would expect the artist to be wearing something a bit more formal than on stage. The two are also in the same social group, they are both white, middle class. Appearance wise I have compared him to Weeks although his character is a bit more outlandish and has a 'louder' personality. I have compared Sam Burnham to other frontmen in the article, his stage style is highlighted throughout the article. He is likened to Yannis Philippakis and Ryan Jarman for being represented as a fairly adventurous character, particularly with Yannis who is known for not staying on the stage all the time when performing. 

Evaluation Activity 3

What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?

Bauer Media is Europe’s largest privately owned publishing group. It has 19 million adults who are reached through the company’s multiple media outlets, mainly magazines and radio. Some of it’s leading magazine brands include men’s magazine FHM & ZOO, Grazia (fashion), Closer & Heat (showbiz), Empire (films), Match Magazine (sport), Kerrang (rock). It also has Q magazine which would be the closest competitor to my magazine. Although this may mean that a company would not want to take on a similar magazine to one that it already has, Bauer Media as shown above has some magazines that are even more similar and would have very similar audiences for example Closer & Heat, FHM & Zoo. Q is aimed at a slightly wider musical genre  than the indie genre my magazine is targeting. This would also mean that the company would be aiming to a wider music magazine audience, with RADAR and Kerrang it would cover two more specific genres and Q may be for a wider audience. I think my magazine's unique selling point is that it is in a genre of music which is put across in a more informal manner (e.g older NME Magazines) however I feel mine puts an effective upmarket touch to this genre in my magazine. 

A magazine publishing company is responsible for editing the magazine and putting it out into the media. Magazine’s are an example of ‘Periodical Literature’ where new editions are published on a regular schedule. Bauer Media obviously has great experience in this as it has done it with many magazines spread across many interests and genres.

Evaluation Activity 4

Who would be the audience for your media product?

My ideal target audience would be those that are interested in the Indie musical genre. This nowadays is a growing popularity, more and more people have different perceptions of what indie is. My audience is likely to span from older teenage (18/19) to around the ages of 30/35. I think this age range would be appropriate, the 18 year olds would not be a restriction, but as I would aim the magazine to be more sophisticated and this age group would appreciate this. I feel my magazine would be suitable for both genders as indie is a genre which is popular in both men and women. A typical member of the audience will be interested in new music in the indie genre. If their musical interest is high they will probably attend many gigs and read reviews about the best performances around the country in the magazine and where to see their favourite bands. 

Typical audience member: 

Age: 20

Occupation: Student

Likes/interests: Music, films, photgraphy

Favourite Bands/Artists: The Vaccines, The Maccabees, The Cribs. 

Hobbies: Going to gigs, listening to music/radio watching Tv. Enjoys festivals. 

Evaluation Activity 5

How did you attract/address your audience?

 The colour scheme on the cover allows certain aspects to show out more than others. The contrasting red allows the main cover line and masthead to do this. The ‘2011 festival special’ grabs the readers attention as it is highlighted in a way due to it being presented differently than the other cover lines. The main coverline features the main artist of the magazine - the ‘cover story’. The coverlines in the top right are similar as they have the title and have a small description of the story included, the less important cover lines are shown in simple list from in the top left and bottom right. In the bottom left is another example of coverlines being presented in a different way to help stand out more, the feature includes different albums so are included together with the black highlight. The RADAR masthead is easy to read and in the distinctive font, will be recognisable to the audience. Along the top of the page is a lure, this competition entices the reader further into buying the magazine as they will want to be involved in the competition and could be one of the first things the reader sees as it is a the top of the page. 

The contents page includes a fairly simple list form set out down the left hand side of the page. It allows it to be easily readable but still shown in a style that works well. It has the features which would be in every issue of the magazine, under ‘monthly’. Then the features which are in the magazine are shown underneath. These stories are the ones that the magazine will be bought for, from non-subscribers. The people who will buy the magazine for a particular artist or band, whether they are on the cover or have a review or interview with them. The cover story is presented with the large image on the page, with a title shown on the image and what page the feature is on. The  other main features in the article are shown with smaller pictures and presented with the same text box and page number. 

The layout of the double page spread is simplistic but still features a lot of information and stories about the artist. The quote shown next to the artist is selected to attract the reader who may not be seeking to read the article in a way. It is shown to sum up the article and give the reader an idea of what it is about and aims to entice them into reading on. Like the cover, ‘SAM BURNHAM’ is presented quite clearly so that at first glance the reader will know what the article is about and who the artist is. The image shows the artist in a slightly more casual manner than on the cover, with his shirt undone. This could be representing the informality of the interview in the article and also shows the artist as being a bit less ‘rigid’ in his appearance. 

Evaluation Activity 6

What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?

Camera

For the images I took for my magazine I used a Canon EOS 1000D DSLR. In using this, I could take many high quality photos in quick succession. The manual setting allowed me to adapt the white balance, depth of field, focus etc. to get the best quality images possible. Before I would use a digital camera with automatic settings, but now I know how much better quality images can be achieved using a manual SLR. 

Computers

I used my macbook to make my magazine, this allowed programs like photoshop to run faster and more efficiently allowing me to complete my magazine quicker and to a higher quality.  

Software 

The latest Adobe Photoshop - CS5 is a great program to edit photos and set out the magazine. I originally knew how to do some simple things on it, but as I started to put my magazine together I learnt new ways to use the program and benefitted with my magazine. I used Pages as a word processor to write up all my documents I needed. The web applications I used for research in particular include scribd, to help upload my documents and animoto to make animated presentations. 

iPhone
I used my phone as a way to take notes when away from a computer and take photos to help me in my preliminary tasks and test shooting. 

Evaluation Activity 7

Looking back at your preliminary task (the school magazine task), what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to full product?

From the preliminary task I learnt the basics of magazine layout, when making my magazine I quickly realised just how hard it is to produce a magazine to a professional standard. My preliminary cover features a mid shot, with a few cover lines. The image was taken on a digital camera so the quality was not the greatest, the cover lines overlap the image which makes them look a bit out of place. I feel my preliminary cover was very poor and far too basic. The font I used was a very basic and plain font, it looks very boring. On my final cover I feel the more condensed fonts I used are a bit more eye catching and interesting. I feel I eventually, with my final cover, learnt how to make a magazine eye-catching and professional-looking. The preliminary contents was also quite poor, I knew that I had left too much blank white space and did not include enough information. My final contents page was made to fill the page, but still with the aim of a simplistic style and to not overload with content. My research helped me a lot, when I was searching through many indie magazines, I also looked at some other magazines which carried a similar class that I was aiming to achieve.  Esquire was a great inspiration, this magazine has a great mix of content and style and I felt elements from the magazine helped me to get a better idea of how to make a magazine look good. I think with looking at so many style models, through a variety of genres it built up my level of creativity and knowledge in how to make a magazine look good. Overall I feel when putting the final pieces together that it takes a few tries to get the layout right and looking the way you want it too, but when you have the layout right your magazine looks good and has a professional feel. 

Final Magazine

Cover Re-draft

I have changed the masthead and main coverline slightly, by removing the stroke on them. I have also shortened the subtitle on the main coverline and removed some coverlines. I have added a banner at the top and a lure in the circular text box. 

Magazine improvements from feedback

From the feedback I have received from teachers and peers, i think the following improvements may be necessary: 
Cover: 
-Reduce the amount of text on the right of the page.
-Change colour and amount of text under 'SAM BURNHAM' coverline. 
-Change colour/brightness or contrast of main image. 
-Consider changing background from plain white. 
Contents 
-Change picture of lad in football shirt 
Double Page Spread
-Check spelling errors
-Make sure article suits genre etc.